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08 July 2009 @ 10:16 pm
[one shot] Untitled  
Title: Untitled
Pairing: Massu x Tego
Rating: PG
Summary: He kisses Massu because Massu's lips are nice and sweet, and he knows he won't get into trouble.
Disclaimer: Fanfiction, people. I don’t own them.
A/N: I found these prompts on my harddrive and thought that since I haven't written in a while, why not? I also still suck at titles. If anyone can think of a better one, I'll be grateful ♥. I'm also dedicating this to [info]selfdemo, because she said something really sweet to me the other day, and she hasn't prompted me yet.

(hello) It's sunny, and the rays keep filtering through the tree canopy to leave jigsaw-pieces of light on the floor. There's music playing and he's not sure where it's coming from, but it sounds nice, and if he closes his eyes it's like he's back to yesterday and he can relive the moment again and again and again, and he has no regrets, not really.

(i'm sorry) He kisses Massu because Massu's lips are nice and sweet, and he knows he shouldn't but he doesn't really care for the consequences. Massu's nice and sweet too, and he knows he won't get into trouble. He pulls back and Massu's eyes are wide, and he's surprised, and his mouth looks like a fishes' and he laughs because it's a funny picture. Massu doesn't look angry, just blinks a few times and looks at his ice cream. Massu decides he's not going to even try and figure him out this time, and just sticks another spoon in his mouth. He smiles and swipes some ice cream onto the tip of his little finger, sticks it into his mouth and makes a 'pop' noise when he takes it back out. He cuddles into Massu's side and Massu just sighs and grabs for another spoon from under the table.

(i have to tell you) It's nice in the park and he's sitting on a bench with Tinny snuffling at his feet. He's sixteen years old so he supposes he does not have to be grown up about things yet, and decides that next time he sees Massu he's going to see if he can steal another kiss. It's not that he likes Massu like that, it's just that he's nice and sweet and won't mind if he kisses him. Tinny yawns and then opens her eyes, then tries to scrabble onto his lap, but she's short and and she keeps slipping off the fabric of his tracksuit pants. He laughs and asks if they should go home, and Tinny wags her tail, and he gets up and tries to catch the little jigsaw-pieces of light. Tinny bites after one of them and it moves and she yelps in surprise, and then a yellow butterfly flutters away and he laughs again, then calls for Tinny so they can go home.

(i miss your kiss) Practice is cancelled the next day and it's a Sunday so he's left sleeping in with lips moving to nothing. He kisses the mirror, kisses the stuffed bear, kisses his pillow, but it tastes dry and boring and plain and he ends up feeling really stupid and embarrassed. He gets up and goes downstairs; his family is out, so he looks in the refrigerator and stares, then pulls out some strawberries from the very back. Then he pretends he doesn't feel stupid eating them.

(quite terribly) He's lying down on his sofa with the TV switched off; daytime TV sucks at this hour because all that's on is kiddy-learning programs, and he's way too old for that. He looks at his phone and he sends the fourth text message in the past half-hour, because Massu hasn't replied back and he's bored, bored, bored. Then the phone vibrates and he sits up fast, and Tinny yelps from her position in his lap, and he looks at the screen and grins. He types in a quick message and then blows a kiss at the screen, and presses send, and pretends to himself that the kiss got sent too and imagines the surprised look that'll be on Massu's face when he receives it.

(i hope you understand) They send messages to each other for the next two hours because it seems like they're both bored and they don't mention the kiss at all. He invites Massu around and he agrees, and he spends the next half-hour staring at the mirror and messing with his hair, before he realises he still hasn't changed out of his pyjamas yet and nearly trips on the stairs on his way up.

(i like it when you smile) When Massu knocks on his door he opens it and grabs him, pulls him inside and kisses him, and he really hopes he still tastes like strawberries. He pulls back and Massu doesn't know what to say, so he sighs and smiles tiredly. He likes Massu because he's nice and sweet, and he won't get in trouble if he kisses him, and because he has a smile like the sun and the jigsaw-pieces of light that were making the ground beautiful.

(i like it when you laugh) They end up playing video games on multi-player because it's more fun than playing on your own, and because Massu doesn't mind if he loses. They eat junk food and drink cans and cans of coke, and he left one strawberry in the bowl from earlier and force feeds it to Massu, and in doing so loses. Massu stares at his shocked face when he sees the “game over” and then laughs, and it's the most beautiful thing ever.

(and when the stars come out at night) When his mother and grandma get home, they point out to him that the sun has already fallen, and invite Massu to stay. He runs upstairs to lay the spare futon out in his bedroom while Massu phones his mother to tell her not to worry, and catches sight through his window of the first few stars hovering in front of an orange-black backdrop. He runs back downstairs and tells mother that Tinny hadn't been taken for a walk today.

(we'll walk to the park) He lives only a few roads away from the park, which is handy, and he leads Massu and Tinny to the place where the sun shone through the tree canopy.

(we'll sit down together) He sits on the bench and Massu squats down and looks at the patterns on the floor, because the moon's out and the jigsaw-pieces have turned white, and Tinny waits to see if any of the pieces will move this time too, but they don't.

(we'll make patterns in the grass) Massu grabs his wrist and pulls him down to Tinny's level, and it looks new, seeing it up close, but he's more amazed at how new Massu looks as he traces the outlines of the light, and he moves in to kiss him. He counts to ten, and when he moves back Massu is looking at him, and he's totally out of breath and he's wondering if he looks new too.

(just smile for me) Tinny sits on his lap because Massu's still afraid of dogs, but they watch the moths appear in the moonlight and Massu lets him put his head on his shoulder, and Massu smiles because he's not that afraid any more.

(smile forever.)
 
 
( 24 comments — Post a new comment )
[info]jtriskell on July 8th, 2009 10:06 pm (UTC)
Sweet!
I really liked the style of writing. It's evocative and warm.
Thanks for sharing. :)
[info]flipbookfrog on July 9th, 2009 02:56 pm (UTC)
Aw thank you so much. And thanks for reading~.
[info]iolekei on July 9th, 2009 02:27 am (UTC)
Thanks for sharing this :)

Just like Massu's lips, this piece was nice and sweet :)
I particularly liked the (I miss your kiss) paragraph-- Tegoshi kissing inanimate objects is funny and oddly enough, I can quite picture him doing it :3

Thanks again!
[info]flipbookfrog on July 9th, 2009 02:57 pm (UTC)
Oh, thank you. Haha I liked that part too, I thought it sounded quite a cute thing to do. Thanks for reading~.
[info]treegonometry on July 9th, 2009 09:07 am (UTC)
I really liked how you used "jigsaw pieces of light" and "black orange".(:
the (i like it when you laugh) paragraph was my favourite (:
thanks for sharing!
[info]flipbookfrog on July 9th, 2009 02:58 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! And for reading :) I was actually thinking of using the jigsaw-pieces as a title but obviously I fail at titling things, oh well.
[info]treegonometry on July 9th, 2009 03:01 pm (UTC)
I actually think leaving it untitled was good , there's this nice little sense of ambiguity. (:
[info]flipbookfrog on July 9th, 2009 09:16 pm (UTC)
I might do; naming things was never my strong point :D;;
[info]annedee08 on July 9th, 2009 02:09 pm (UTC)
that was heartwarming~ =3
so sweet and adorable~
perfect for tegomassu ^^
[info]flipbookfrog on July 9th, 2009 02:59 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[info]soantigone on July 10th, 2009 12:00 am (UTC)
This was really something else. I loved how it felt like...white noise almost. No, that's not right. Like a constant chatter going on - all young boy thoughts colliding with the next ones again and again and again until it all runs together and it doesn't slow down until the very last few words. I especially love the "we'll make patterns in the grass" part. Lovely. Thank you.
[info]flipbookfrog on July 10th, 2009 10:26 pm (UTC)
Ah, thank you. Your comment actually made me ~really~ happy, eh heh. I liked your interpretation of "white noise"... I don't really know what I was going for exactly, sort of like... he's still a kid and... excitable i guess?

anyways, thank you so much! :)
[info]sinestrated on July 10th, 2009 03:46 am (UTC)
I liked this. Very simple and sweet and down-to-earth (much like Massu himself, huh?), and you don't overcomplicate their relationship. Good job. =)
[info]flipbookfrog on July 10th, 2009 10:27 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it (actually, I'm really happy you liked it; I adore your writing~).
[info]snaaa on July 11th, 2009 03:34 pm (UTC)
Flip wins at everything forever. You really do, my dear.
If anyone can dig in my brain and tell me what this reminds me of it'd be nice though :P
Sorry it's taken me so long to read it bab, I've not been online :( The next one you write you dedicate to the death of psychology essays, okay? :P
[info]flipbookfrog on July 11th, 2009 10:49 pm (UTC)
Thanks, babes :) ♥
[info]trivialaffair on July 13th, 2009 05:52 am (UTC)
Oh god. That was lovely. lakdfmadlf. PAV.
[info]flipbookfrog on July 13th, 2009 02:28 pm (UTC)


you'd like it better if it wasn't tegoshi tho, yeah? :p
[info]trivialaffair on July 14th, 2009 05:07 am (UTC)
well, maybe XP nevertheless, this was lovely, so. yeah :DDDD
[info]selfdemo on July 14th, 2009 03:08 pm (UTC)
oh my! oh my! oh my!

i want to read it so bad. i'll have to save it on my ebook though. i'm off to work right now. sheesh. but... i promise to be back and post a real comment! no really. i promise. and... this is so SWEET like OHMIGOSHSOSWEET!

and the pair!: ryo/massu. um. i love your fics about them. I LOVE YOUR FICS ABOUT THEM. hahahaha and the prompt: and all roads lead to men. (the little prince)

or

pair: tegoshi/massu
prompt: and, lying in the grass, he cried. (the little prince)
[info]flipbookfrog on July 14th, 2009 04:04 pm (UTC)
......:D ♥ I LOVE your prompts. I might even write both. omg.
[info]kataomi on September 9th, 2009 02:54 am (UTC)
That's so sweet ...I really love the way you write this fic .....^^
[info]flipbookfrog on September 9th, 2009 07:12 pm (UTC)
Thank you :)
[info]meli_29 on September 10th, 2009 06:17 am (UTC)
uwa~
this was so warm♥
I want to kiss Massu too xD
thank you!
 
 

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